Talk:Kaly Dream/@comment-27181220-20150710165223

This is a great OC! But I only have a few things to cover:

That is all! Otherwise I think Kaly Dream is an excellent original character. And I am really sorry if any of this sounds offending. I just want to say that when I give my opinion, I am very honest and will say what I think. Again, I'm sorry if this offends you in any way. :)
 * Profile (Infobox bio): I've noticed this on a few of your other OCs, the character's "Oh Curses! Moment" isn't exactly like a pet peeve, but more like a flaw the character has. Like something they would shout "Oh, dang it!" at.
 * Personality: Some things like "Her favorite flower isn't a surprise of course it is a rose" and "Her favorite sport is baseball" are things that would probably be better of in the Trivia section.
 * Personality: The Personality section is more to describe the character traits of your character rather than describing what they do and their early life. In Kaly's case, you could put something like "Kaly is very cheerful and friendly. She is a great friend, and is very kind and smart. When she was a kid, she used to be rude, and she was punished. Ever since Kaly has been sweet and kind." Or something like that.
 * Trivia: Kaly alone means "rosebud".