User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-11163511-20150718040111/@comment-33209858-20150718042647

Aww, I'm so flattered by your kind words ^^ I'd be more than happy to look over Sam for you~

I love how he's a very logical-based character in a magical world. That alone in itself is a very unique concept, I think. I think you've written out his personality very well, as I got a sense of who Sam was just from the first couple of sentences. However, I'd like to see more expanded on his character. I feel like his personality section mostly focuses on his logic. Feel free to expand more on his other traits - For example, I noticed that Sam is someone who never backs down from a challenge. Has that ever gotten him in trouble? Does he have enough self-control to know when to stop?

Also, I love how Sam speaks. His quotes, as well as his bio-box, definitely help add onto his character! And I do like his Interests and Hobbies section as well, as that helps broaden his character more as well. Also, something I noticed in his Relationships section was that it was never stated how Sam feels about his mother and father. Is he close to them? Does he look up to them? Why or why not?

Overall, I really enjoyed reading his profile, and I think he's a very good character! In fact, I'd love to see some interaction between either him and Brawny, since I think they'd be a hilarious duo, or him and Valiant, since she also speaks with a very heightened articulation. Of course, none of them ever have to interact, but I just thought I'd throw that out there~ And if you would like me to review another character or anything of the like, just let me know!