Talk:Seelia Carventail/@comment-25462774-20140502122303

Such a great and warming mix of reality and Fairytale notes exist here. The details are beautiful and the article is pretty enjoyable as you read it, but some sections need corrections. Let's take her personality as an example. I like how it's highly qualified and development, but I think that you should "walk in your character shoes" when you write an article like this. Try to express her feelings and thoughts, describe her in detail or add information about her alignment choice. I know that creating a good personality is tricky but I'm sure that you will make it. As for her appearance, I must say that I'm pretty happy with the result and description. You can add more features about her human and mouse form. I loved her relationships until the last word and I truly appreciated the Samuel Gulliver part of its, since I saw a great friendship being development.:) She needs some corrections, but she's a great character thought.