Thread:Breannamation/@comment-25067762-20140421175058/@comment-30898879-20140421175458

It's not that it isn't good, I think that it is great.

However, it isn't a fairytale, so I see why they have said this. Also, you haven't used capital letters at the start of sentences. That's all, really. It's easy to change the capital letters thing :)