Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-26220869-20150319162957/@comment-25936606-20150319180231

He coldly took the paper from her hand, saying, "Let's see how you're writing matches up to your mathematics." He took the time to look it over with the same criticism he had with her other assignment. This, which had not yet been edited, contained quite a few mistakes. He mercilessly took note of every one and finally handed it back. "Your grammatical skills could you some work, and I'm not fond of you transitions. It's rather verbose, however there's not much variation in the words you used."