User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-26208189-20150530114740/@comment-33209858-20150531062216

Aww, tell your sister I don't bite~ And I'll be happy to help you! c:

First of all, Cowoline is an adorable name! I love the pun and it totally fits very well with Ever After. Her personality is also well-written - I like how she added that Cowoline was "annoying" in addition to being energetic and perky. I think that sort of flaw fits perfectly with more outgoing people. Also, the fact that she has a speech impedient is a nice touch - Although I'm wondering if that affects her self-esteem in some way? Also, how do other fairytales react about this? Does she get bullied because of it? If so, how does it affect her?

I think her design is very cute as well~ I like the cow spot patterns she wears. One thing that I'm wondering is - She is chubby? Because I could totally picture ber being a little on the chubby side, which would make her even cuter, in my opinion~ I'm just wondering because it isn't specified whether she is thin or not, but I think it'd be a nice touch!

Oh, and her infobox is great! I love how her Secret Heart's Desire does show some insecurities she feels. I love it when even the tiniest things give you clues to a character's personality. Also, the fact that she uses all sorts of mooing puns is super cute!Some

thigngs that I'd like to see is her relationship with her parents - I noticed that in her personality section that she likes to claim that she can jup higher than her mother. Does her mother know about this, and if so how does she feel? I'd also like to know if she has siblings of any sort. Also, could you possibly expand on why she has taking a liking to Humphrey Dumpty? Oh, and why does she have a guinea pig as a pet? Is there a reason for it, like a pun or something that I'm missing? If so, please do tell me!

Personally, I'm really liking Cowoline a lot! She's cute, interesting, and I haven't seen very many Cow Jumped Over the Moon OCs, so to a certain extent she's also unique in that sense! I can't wait to see more of her in the future~

And now onto Jolina Rogers~

I like the idea of a very sassy pirate - Perhaps she's already acting like a Captain, and so she tends to treat everybody else more or less like her crew. She could be bossy and very manipulative - So if somebody won't do something for her, then she'd be the type of person to trick them into doing it for her anyways. Perhaps she's a bit of a loud-mouth, and maybe even sometimes curses like a sailor. She could be a tomboy who takes no shizz from anyone; And if you provoke her enough (I could see her being hotheaded), then she won't hestiate to fight you.

Maybe she wants to be Captain one day so bad that she'd do anything to achieve her dream. Maybe sometimes she hangs with the villains to get an advantage for that reason. Maybe she actually really like her destiny of being a pirate, but just likes to identify herself as a Rebel because it makes her sound more like a pirate. I could also see her using lots and lots of pirate "slang" and sometimes other people don't understand what she's saying so she gets all sassy and just rolls her eyes.

Some personality trait ideas: Hotblooded, daring, adventurous, vengeful, humorous, impatient, dynamic

Hopefully I helped in some way, and if you have any questions or concerns, just let me know~