Talk:Veritas Virumque/P1E1/@comment-25954732-20190805030102

Okay time to violently tap the mic and annoy the imaginary sound crew

I’m live-blogging in your DMs but I LOVE the interplay between character stars here. Ablative’s awkward and mostly one-sided dialogue with Turnus is choice. Also, I like how you sprinkle in little details to carry dialogue along; it makes the flow feel very natural. The contrast between how Turnus’ eyes used to sparkle and how they’re very dead now made my heart ache a little actually

^^ just,,, I’m so hype gonna keep going