Talk:New Girl/@comment-98.246.160.140-20131122234744

Alright, I'm gonna be honest. This is a really good story with good writing, but it doesn't feel like ever after high.

The scenario is just to modern and.... well if there wasn't the occasional mention of "rapunzel" I would have forgotten I was reading about eah. Also I think you should make the teacher a fairytale character.

I'm sorry, but this reminded me more of teen-drama-romance instead of fairytalecharacter child falls in love with teacher.

If you want it to sound more Ever after high-like, maybe you should add some canon characters.