User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-27226023-20150708063151/@comment-33209858-20150718033958

Forgive me for this extremely late reply. Between recovering from an illness and volunteer work, I've really been pretty MIA on the wiki for a while now. Anyways, here is my review for Calli!

First of all, I love how much you've written about her. It's so in-depth that it really makes Calli come alive. She has a good list of positive traits as well as flaws. I do like that she has a softer side to her that's different from her regular trickster nature. Plus, I can just tell from her entire profile how much time and effort you've spent on her page(s). It's quite remarkable to be honest!

Since you've pretty much covered practically everything I nitpick at, I'm going to delve a bit deeper, if only so that I actually have something to comment on: I noticed that Calli apparently likes to read. What specifically does she like to read? Cheesy romances or thrillers or fantasy or something else? Also, I noticed on her Trivia page that Calli has recevied counseling and was even institionalized at one point. That's a pretty big deal, trust me, because I've been through both experiences (unless you meant institutionalized in prison and not a mental hospital, then I haven't been throught that). So, how has that affected Calli? Did any of it even faze her?

I also enjoyed reading through her Relationships. It was very in-depth and it helped flesh her out character even more so. It got me really curious about her parents, too, particularly her mother. Oh, and I like all the little Trivia tidbits you added. Overall, her profile was fun to read, even though it did take me a while. Still, that's probably more of a good thing than a bad!

So, you pretty much have a very well-written and excellent character on your hands. Calli is a wonderful addition to this wikia, I must say~ And it makes me want to go and expand and write more for all my characters as well! If you need any help or advice, just let me know and I'll do my best!