Talk:Ebony S. White/@comment-216.232.227.230-20140713084903

It's really good, but the reason why Rose Red gives her up doesn't make sense. Why did she and her husband HAVE to get into that village? If she was willing to give up her baby, why wasn't she willing to go wherever her daughter needed her to be? And she just happens to leave her daughter at the nearest castle, which belongs to her old friend Snow White (Why not just ask Snow for helping instead of involving the horrible, child-hating village at all?)

Everything else is awesome!