User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-99.110.176.71-20150614001534/@comment-33209858-20150614164831

Hello there! I'm more than happy to help C:

So, I'll start with your daughter of the Queen of the Field Mice because I have more ideas for her. For first names, it can have something to do with 'field' or 'mouse', or you could even name her Queenie. For example, names like Fieldleigh or Mouschelle (pun on Michelle) or Mousceline/a (pun on Marceline/a). As for last names, you could always go with the generic 'Queen', or Field/s or Mouse depending on what first name you choose. I like the name Mouscelina Fields/Queen very much myself~

For her appearance/design, I'd say mousy brown hair and a short stature to allude to her mouse heritage would be a nice touch. Since the mice live in a field of poppies, you could inpororate that into her design as well. Perhaps she wears a crown of poppies, or a poppy-colored dress. I like the idea of making her have more of a floral, sort of "country" look to her instead of making her dress like royalty. You could also give her cute little mouse ears and a tail as well

And for her personality, I like the idea of making her helpful and a bit on the innocent side. Her destiny is to pretty much help out Dorothy and Co. in the story, so it would only be natural that she's generous and caring. However, this could be a flaw in and of itself, as kind-hearted people may have a tougher time telling their friends "no" and it could make them a bit of a pushover. You could make her a bit on the shy side, or you could make her personality more brazen and bold - Perhaps she's tiny with a big mouth/personality? Maybe she loves helping people out, but her brashness often makes her more intense than she intented to be. A character like this could have a very fun personality to work with, but it depends on what sort of character you're looking for

As for your son of Miss Cuttenclip, the best name I could come up with was Cullen Clip, and that's not even that great. I'd say to find a name starting with M and giving him the surname Cuttenclip, so that it fits his tale more though

For his appearance/design, I'd make him look very similar to his mother - Blonde hair, blue eyes, with rosy cheeks. You could give him plainer clothes, just like his mother wore. I'd even suggest making his color scheme white and pink like his mom too, just to break gender norms. I mean, who's to say that pink is an exclusively feminine color, right? I'd also add in another color to him as well, though, for more diversity - Spring green or baby blue goes great with white and pink! Also, since his mother made lovely paper dolls, you could incorporate that in his outfits somehow.

For his personality, I like the idea of making him artsy and creative. I mean, his mother had her whole thing with papers and paints and such, so perhaps he does too. You could make him sensitive like an artist, but proud of his hard work nonetheless. You could even make him a bit of a perfectionist - perhaps if he can't get a certain paper doll to look just right he starts breaking down. Or, he could be super sensitive to what others say about his art. Maybe he heard someone making fun of it and either started crying or threatened to beat him up - depends on what sort of personality you end up giving him. I enjoy the "sensitive artist" trope, as I can definitely relate

Well, that's all the ideas I have right now~ If you need any more help, feel free to ask!