User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-26208189-20150824031938/@comment-33209858-20150825035853

Hi there! I'd be more than happy to look over those two for you c: I'll start with Sandra first~

From what I can tell from her personality, she's a very interesting and complex character. I'd like to see more focused on some of her other traits other than just "super smart" and a great actress. I'd especially like to see some flaws for her, too, because it seemed like her personality section was focusing mostly on her positive traits, and not on any negative ones

I do like how you've teased us with tidbits of her past - just enough to show how it has affected her character. Unfortunately, I can't say too much about her because there's not much on her that's not shrouded in secrecy. Still, I look forward to seeing how you develop her in the future!

As for Princhesca, I really like her character so far! I think her personality is interesting, however, I do think some of her traits just jump all over the place and even contradict each other sometimes. For example, one of her most prominent traits is how unrealible and irresponsible she is, and yet she is also apparently very committed to doing things like keeping a strict diet. Also, you state that she hates treating other people like servants, but earlier you mention her not being above using other people to do things for her - To me, I feel like those traits contradict each other greatly, so I'd watch out for little things like that

Also, I'm curious as to why she's a Rebel. She apparently dislikes her story, but why? Maybe delve deeper into that and explain why she feels that way. Because from what I can tell, her story has a happy ending. And I'd also like to see more added to her Relationships, because I feel like a character like Princhesca would be fun making up interactions for - Plus, it would be an interesting way to show her character as well.

Well, that's all the thoughts I had! Overall, I have to say that I enjoyed reading both of their profiles, and I'm very excited to see more of them! If you have any questions or concerns, or if you'd like any more help or critiques, just let me know! ^^