Talk:Veritas Virumque/P2E4/@comment-25954732-20200120214219

My emotions on this chapter can not be transcribed into mere words, but I’m just going to try and sum up my favorite parts.

all of your kids have very charming dialogue, but esp the FKS? they’re v dramatic bros. love them. I think you really write this like. 16 year old prince vibe well.

Also, the dream sequence was really fun ;w; I like the dialogue it gives off the proper vibe for that sort of lucid dreaming experience. I dunno! The entire chapter’s perfect! Please accept my love!