Talk:Beau Avenant Charming/@comment-24579399-20140528213825

I'm here again! My critique is being delivered...

1. So he's perfect. Never good. Although, I would suggest making him enviable on the outside, but insecure on the inside. Many people I know who are good looking, nice, and everything you can ever dream of in a personality have insecurities. They are constantly mad at their mistakes, and tend to be stressed in the end.

2. In love with the Ugly Duckling (neat idea) but nobody gives a second glance? He seems like the guy that girls always hang around. I can imagine that every girl would be going crazy that he's dating (gasp) the Ugly Duckling. What would he do?

3. How doesn't Bluebell know he's her prince? She would know, it's just how this world goes. Not much more on that.

That's it for now, and I might come around again once his page is updated.