Talk:Jade Saiban/@comment-26949724-20141224222503/@comment-8267955-20141225025338

I'd have to agree with LunarLana here, the coined "white girl" stereotype is frowned upon by many of the users here. As an admin, I really have to ask you to change what you placed in the Secret Heart's Desire.

If you don't mind, I'd also like to have a few critiques for your character, you should really expound more on Jade's appearance because "having an arabic complexion" is quite generalized. Arabic people can have caramel-colored, coffee-colored, dark brown, and some also can have light skin, so having an arabic complexion, isn't the most specific characteristic. Another thing is that you could explain more on how she relates to her story and how supposedly her parentshad rebelled.

Hope you'd take these critiques in mind! Your character does have potential so with a little love and a lot of time, I hope to see her more about her in the future. :)