User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-26163219-20150824233626/@comment-33209858-20150825040901

Hello! I'd be more than happy to help~

Looking over Serapinea's profile, I get the sense of her being a very blunt and straightforward character. She's obviously a Rebel, so perhaps you could expand on that more in order to help with her personality - For example, perhaps she's a very strong-willed and passionate Rebel, who believes in changing destiny for the betterment of fairytale's lives. Or perhaps she's deathly afraid of her ending, and lashes out at others who try to talk to her about it. I could imagine her being a responsible, reliable, and confident character, although perhaps she could also be very stubborn and unemotional

Another idea for her personality is to make her cold, guarded, and moody. However, this is because she's terrified of her destiny, and is too afraid to speak out against it. Perhaps she has walls surrounding her, that have to be torn down one by one before someone finally gets to know the real Serapinea. Perhaps she's pessimistic and melancholy, but has a quick, dry sense of humor

As for her appearance, I'd suggest perhaps giving her a metallic-y sort of color scheme, as a nod to the Tin Soldier. For example, she could have black hair with silver/grey streaks and silvery eyes. I also like the idea of her having brown hair and blue eyes, with a red, gold and blue color scheme. I guess it just depends on how you envision her!

Hopefully I helped in some way with all my ideas! If not, just let me know and I'll gladly try again!