Thread:DatAsymptote/@comment-6647954-20131020201915/@comment-26414442-20131021055015

I would prefer if you didn't use a base, resized the image so the page doesn't look cramped, tidied up your grammar/spelling/punctuation/all that jazz, and added more relevant information. The page tells me more about the story and her appearance rather than her actual character.

There.

Take my critique. Do whatever you want with said critique. *backflips out*