Thread:DatAsymptote/@comment-31597382-20200112210638/@comment-3991308-20200112212124

Ris this is so sweet! You got their dynamic perfectly. Wagner really knows the exact phrases that a witty parent would use to get their child to behave, and small details - like 'don't start a book after 9' is just perfect for the two. I also really love how Franz is nervous to call Johann dad, even though he *is* the man who raised him, which shows some fear and vulnerability. And adding things in like Franz's coffee obsession is so well done!! Thank you, thank you, this is fantastic.