User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-26208189-20150723135156

I'd like a critique on Porri Sweet and Queenie Diliman becuase they're the two new "spur-of-the-moment" creations.

Also, I lied about writing everything down during my vacation. I literally am just writing them all down now at the night I make they're pages.