Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-72.83.190.77-20150424013024/@comment-26242422-20150514011953

Jane looked over the lyrics nodding as she sang the song to herself before tinkering with her drum set to add a few parts, "Okay Poem... your lyrics might need to be amped up a little... Like for the beginning you could perhaps have something like:

'It started at the end of a different story, The school bells rang of a new beginning, Our tale started out in the brisk autumn air...'

But that's just my opinion of how the song should go... Or something with longer lines so I get a beat out of it..." She trailed off she didn't usually sing much in public not that she was bad just wasn't her strongest asset to the band.