User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-3991308-20150727063921

Hey Vin! A while ago I rewrote Airmid Valerian's personality in order to both add on what I had developed of her since the last time I updated her page as well as subvert the "arrogant flawless genius" sort of trope.

Although she's currently a secondary character in my storylines right now, once I'm done with the Junipers, Airy will be gaining a larger focus. I would love to have just a few pointers on where I can go with her personality, interests and relationships!

And if it's not too much, a tiny critique on Branches, Birches and Junipers would be much appreciated. Although I've got the plot all planned out I feel as if I'm losing some steam.