Talk:Ebony S. White/@comment-25462774-20140421192728

I'm completely satisfied by this character. Her personality is surely well development, full of interesting facts. I love how she is a lonely troublemaker, and she has a rebellious attitude. As for her appearance,I think that you need to expand this section a bit. Why don't you refer to her height, body type and facial features? In this way the others would have a better picture of the character.

In her relationships section, the only that I don't understand, is where did the baby~Ebony come from. How about giving a little more depth in her backstory? Also one more thing that I don't understand is why she's not so friendly to environment. Is there any reason for that? What about describing this in detail? I would be delighted to know. So that's my critique, and I hope you will make this character better. I'm honored to talk about such a good article.