Talk:Maci-Go-Round/@comment-25462774-20140421174533

Hey there Evie. Here's my critique for her.

You may know how I appreciate well development personalities, so I will suggest you to expand her's too. She's mainly weird and creepy, but that's not enough for a "good" Ever After High OC. You should add more facts, flaws and depth to this section. I'm quite happy with her appearance, but you really could add more there. Also maybe you could explain why she's friend with each person in "friends" section. That's truly important and will bring a cute background note to the character. That's all I can refer too, as PolkaDot explained you most of the wrong things about her.