Thread:EtherealNyx/@comment-30167055-20160610090258/@comment-27950523-20160610180315

I'd like to add in that the mark of a good writer is always seeking to improve yourself. Remember a character is never turly done. I think i'ts great, wonderful even, that you seek to improve yourself because as I have said before, that shows a lot of potential in that you're allowing yourself to recognize that you writing has room to grow.

I read over Xandra's page today actually and I have to say, that she does come nicely together and her personality is quite believable to me because you are showing the flaws that she has layered with her personality, how she reacts differently to those around her and that makes a lot of characters beleivable (and her getting bullied the way she does is pretty heartbreaking).

So keep at it and good luck.