User blog comment:EtherealNyx/Advice With Nyx *OPEN NOW*/@comment-26208189-20150830022910/@comment-27235572-20150830025755

Alright, great!

I'd first like to congratulate you. Her personality is very interesting in conjunction to her relationships with her family!

Now, what you should do now is try to flesh her out a bit more. Does she actually enjoy the subterfuge? In other words, does she like lying to them and keeping her secrets? Does she ignore her life of falsehoods?

Or is she ashamed of herself? Does she hate pretending to be someone she's not and does she wish to fully express herself without being judged?

When it comes to risk, how risky are we talking here? Some people would risk their lives for the thrills, while others just take a chance. What types of risks does she take? Does she enjoy dangerous situations or is she adept at handling them?

You noted that she likes to relax in the Forest. This seems to indicate that a- she gets stressed during the day, b- she's a night person and c- she enjoys solitude or the quiet of nature. Are any of these assumptions correct?

When she is tempted, what tempts her? What appeals to her so that she is led into bad decisions? Fleshing out her flaws is really important.

When you say that she lets her views blind those of what people want for her, do those people want to push her into a state of mind that she doesn't want to be in? Or does she sometimes make mistakes with her charade and ends up showing her true self?

I hope these questions help ^_^