Talk:At Least I Look Pretty When I Cry/@comment-3991308-20200121005621

Artemis this is SO GOOD?? So sad, too, and it really does do justice to the sad fish child - it takes their pain and makes it evident how they're suffering and sad and UGH. You wound me so. The difference between their protrayed self and personal self is just v contrasting and v heartbreaking.

One thing that I really love about it is how detached and third-person the narrator seems? Almost as if Merana is aiming to detach themselves from the world, or as if they're already detached from the world.