Talk:One-shot: Lyla's True Hearts Day Dance Dilemma Part 1: Cupid's Advice ./@comment-26461452-20150306095711/@comment-10860529-20150309033800

Well, you don't have to move this out to deviantart or fanfiction dot net. There's even  a fan fiction category on the site after all. I can move it there. ^^

Also, I have one suggestion: Perhaps ypu could break up your fanfic into multiple paragraphs? I find it rather hard to read with the whole story in one wall-of-text. Seems alright otherwise.