Talk:Ablative Charming's diary/@comment-26423188-20190717142554

Can't believe no one's commented here so!! Here I go!

"please clap, my sense of humour is impeccable"

This is very good

"But I am a direct sort of prince, so I wrote up a pretty little letter detailing my interest in the book and got access."

Holy moly, how have I never thought about this? This is actually a fantastic expansion on the world, and I love the idea of the eager headmasters allowing students to see their destiny? And I don't know how to explain it, but here the power sort of transfers, because you'd need to reach out to do it yourself instead of going with it like you would on Legacy Day.

"Your favourite  bastard Prince Charming  just got promoted to the Emperor of Rome."

I aspire to write something as impactful as this statement omg

The scene with Prof. Knight was just aaaaaaa I love your dialogue. It just flows so well and the different character voices?? Perfect. You forgot to italicize one part though, the “Interesting! Any news?” “Can I come in?” part!

Anyways, I'm in love, teach me how to write diaries please