Talk:Wolfy Cry/@comment-3468598-20140608090900

Cool character, but a minor nitpick about your writing.

"He is also very gullible, believing that others also only want to tell the truth. He is also a follower, often letting others make decisions for him and is to scared to step up, rather waiting for someone else to step up and take the place in the spotlight so that he can simply slide by."

You start two sentances in a row with   "He is also"  This is reptative and bores the reader. So you might want to reword it. I performed a minor edit replacing the word Youthy with youthful, as youthy isn't a word.