Talk:Amanda Orabelle/@comment-27181220-20150906174712

OK, so, as a character, I really enjoy Amanda. However, I have a few things to go over...

That is all! I'm sorry if this offended you in any way. :)
 * Personality: No offense, but you may want to give her a few more flaws. The only flaw I can see is in her profile, which is her being clumsy. But that is a common flaw foudn in several people, and not really one that can be considered "original".
 * Personality: You may also want to expand on her character traits a little more. For example, explain why she can be frightened to judge people.