User blog comment:ARCUSTHEGODDESSOFRAINBOWS/Arcus' Name Generator,Card Creations, and Story Creator/@comment-5826914-20140708134700/@comment-8267955-20140815090349

I swear that I am simply dreadful for forgetting about this blog, so Frost Queen needs some improvements so what I'm gonna do is point out things that need to be looked upon more and enhanced.


 * 1) Her personality section seems to be half-baked. There just doesn't seem to be a reason why she is so shy. I'd like to see her personality expounded a little more. What makes her tick and tock?


 * 1) Her overall problem is just the lack of expounding so basically you just need to talk more about her and everything about her~