Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-26208189-20150524005422/@comment-3991308-20150525013901

Oh, China is a cutie! I love the pun in her name, and the pun her parents names. It's very clever and something that's really fun to see about her.

The explanation behind her alignment is very justified. She's conflicted because she doesn't like her destiny, but also because she's not sure what would happen. That's a very realistic approach to take because I doubt the average student would know as much about the history of EAH and Storybooks as Apple and Raven do!

Her bio is very cutely written, and you can definitely get a sense of her vernacular. Furthermore, you listed her hobbies so we get a good sense of what she does and what she likes.

She has a really nice personality – I enjoy how you described her as a free-spirit trying to find her place in the world, but it would be nice to expand that. Why does she want to do that? Why doesn't she have a place in the world now? That's something that would be interesting to see! You also say how she seeks advice from people older than her – is she inexperienced? Is there a reason why she always seeks advice?

Those are two really nice quirks she has, but what is her character like? How does she carry herself? What does she act like towards others? She's introverted – so we know she doesn't interact up to others initally easily, but what is she like when she's amicable towards someone?

She's a very cute character and I would very much like to see more of her! :D