Talk:Lotus Marsh/@comment-27075534-20160819201020

What a brilliant story! I'm so fond of the source material you picked, and the sense of gravity you've given to her looks - she's not the sort of character who'd look just like Apple or Raven, and she does suffer for it, as opposed to everyone magically being able to see she's a good person.

Can't wait to see more of her. :D