Thread:Jade Encrusted Bugs/@comment-5078678-20140209171731

I noticed that some people make their own adaptions and I was wondering what do you think of mine? I'd be gladly take any advice you are willing to give. [http://everafterhighfandom.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:MysticalLove22/Little_Mermaid_OC_and_my_version_of_her_fairytale Here is my adaption. ]  Thank you in advance.

((I'm really worried this is a bad adaption. I think it would give a lot of good ideas like even though she doesn't say it, she's afraid to fall in love and just says love is a waste of time.))  