Thread:Checkerbored99/@comment-26470201-20151216050936/@comment-25954732-20151220173559

Alright, so I reviewed your character. And, I'm not actually quite sure as to her personality, really...

Mostly since the writing of it seems to be conflicting.

Ok, so I get she only pretends to be a brat for her reputation's sake, but why does she have to act this way to keep that reputation up? Is there a reason?

The whole "not always acting" is odd though. At least, when reading it, it seems quite odd to me, since her childish curiosity and a mention of negative emotions that she doesn't actually seem to have is odd.

I'd suggest that instead of acting like a brat, you should have her as a girl who is a little vain and selfish, is curious about the world, and worries about disappointing people. I think that is something you can really grow into a wholesome personality.