Talk:Maci-Go-Round/@comment-24841157-20140420182342

Hello! This is PolkaDot, and you asked for critique, so here it is:

1)She seems a little too creepy. Her only true trait is her creepiness. This is a really bad thing. You should add more depth, and this is a definite. My suggestion is actually completely redoing most of it, and adding a lot more interest. I suggest looking at higher level OCs for inspiration. Being creepy isn't bad, it's being just creepy.

2)Is she a ghost or actually deceased? Either is fine, but use that to add depth and things like that.

3)You might want to explain more about the friends. Most of those friends clash with her personality, but that's okay if you explain why they're friends with her. That would make it easier for the personality to come.

4)Why does she carry a guitar? There isn't a reason or anything mentioning the guitar, so mention it!

5)Fix the grammar and the spelling. That's all you need to hear on that subject.

6)Fill more things in. There is a lot of potential in this character, so fulfill it!