Talk:Emerald West/@comment-24579399-20140409004043

I understand that now you haven't changed it yet and nobody has seen this age for months, but may I say a few things?

1. You should add more to the personality. The personality should be the bulk and what carries your character. This may be your first character, but keep on updating her and make her the best you can make her.

2. I understand that this follows the musical version of Wicked. But still pull into account the actual Wizard of Oz and Wicked the book (Elphaba and Fiyero have a son that stays in Oz).

3. Try her out in the real world! Roleplay her to your hearts content! That is what shapes a character! The temper means nothing unless someone gives a real example of a reaction.

4. Try again on this character? You have a great base, so add!