User blog:Rose0250/Advice (Round 2!)

Hey guys! As you know, I haven't been really that active on the wiki lately. I KNOW I'M SORRY!! But I've been working on a new sort-of side project that has the working title of Amedora. I have a couple of ideas that I'm going to put below in a new section. I want to make it into a novel for NaNoWriMo, but I guess I just wanted some feedback? If you want to read about it, information is down below ^-^.

Characters
''NOTE: I am copying this from my journal where I am keeping all of my notes. I will be updating this as I add more, if you want to read, go on ahead!''

Adeline

 * From Northern capital
 * Maid by day, thief by night
 * Works in a criminal team who are basically her only friends until the other three come along.
 * Orphan
 * Her dad died in a fire a few months before her birth
 * Her mother died while giving birth to her
 * She has a older brother (NAME TBA, leave suggestions below!) but he blames her for their parent's death and she hardly remembers him
 * Tough to get to know,
 * Introverted
 * Tough (not really)
 * Doesn't like having friends
 * Tough but sensitive (physically, mentally)
 * Very OCD
 * Romantic sub-plot w/ Isaias
 * Becomes the "mom" of the group at one point, still don't know when
 * Weapon: Lashbeamer
 * Powers: Air (Elements)
 * Anti-heroine to heroine
 * Style: Grungy medieval? I don't really know how to describe it.

Aurelia

 * From Eastern capital
 * Very fair, she likes to keep odds even for everyone (even the villains)
 * Peacemaker
 * Adventorous
 * Daughter of the president of the Eastern Province, technically making her a "princess"
 * Romantic sub-plot w/ Dylan
 * "If we go down, we go down together." -Paris by the Chainsmokers
 * Style: PASTELS!!! Girly w/ a touch of adventurer. Sneakers, skirts, dresses, etc. (Preppy)
 * Weapon: Aurawhip
 * Powers: Healing + Flying (Human Benefits)
 * A little... TOO sensitive
 * Polite
 * Apologetic
 * Defacto leader of the group
 * Well there really isn't a leader
 * People just assume she is because she was a person in power
 * Longs for her life to be an adventure, like the novels she reads

Isaias
TBA

Dylan
TBA

World
TBA