Talk:Ebony White/@comment-25462774-20140421172804

Hello GirlX! You requested critique for this character so here you are dear: First of all Ebony is pretty fun to read, as her article includes a lot of interesting features about her. I expected a longer personality, as that's one of the shorter sections in the page. Outside of her singing talent her personality is pretty less. I suggest you to add a little more flaws or fan facts about her or even you can explain in detail why she chose to be a rebel. I love how the OC looks almost the same with her mother, but I would prefer a full description of her facial features, height and body type too. I also didn't understand why she's friends with Nattily Gale, as she stays quiet most time. In fact she's a great OC that needs to be development more. Thanks you for reading!