Talk:Those Slow Five Stages/Anger/@comment-26890640-20190817232845/@comment-25954732-20190818010109

oh my gosh thank you,,, I didn’t know what to say for this for a bit because I’m completely incoherent right now but :> I will try my best!

All of the characters you mentioned are ones I deeply enjoy writing actually! I should PROBABLY adresss the actual protag first but ew let’s do someone else for now

I think my love for writing Lily in particular is pretty prominent in Bargaining but even here she’s a character I thought about a lot during the writing process. It’s really fun to start being able to share aspects of her character, and I’m super happy she comes off as terrible because I had this weird ass daydream where people would go ‘Lily did nothing wrong’ when she does,,, basically everything wrong. I’m glad you think she’s well written though I’m always thinking that MAAAAYBE she’s ‘too much’

As for the detention club? I love them. Dick squad! Kim doesn’t show up for the rest of the fic, but he’s in the sequel and I’m hype for that. Ariel’s like,,, a c plot right now it’s fine,,, also what disastrous situation I don’t see one here *shoves plot of that chapter behind a table*

Connor really is the MVP huh,

On a more serious note, he’s funny but he has a lot going on, so I like writing him. I say this a lot but as the one person who doesn’t get a POV each part with him is VERY good in the sense that the characters keep slightly misinterpreting what he does or says. I’m an unreliable narrator.

Finally, Arkypoo or whatever I call him now. He really is someone who made me cry while writing this because I was tired and I’m prone to that. It’s so nice that people think he’s compelling though because yeah. OUCH. Thank you so much this was a lovely comment!