Talk:Isabella Rose/@comment-24841157-20140420133821

I know this character is popular, but I would like to point out some things that need to be fixed.

1)She's quite bland. She has very little personality outside her love triangle (which I will talk about in the next number), which isn't something that you want. For example, if she's only sassy when boys come, isn't that a complete three sixty turn from the shyness that she always feels around boys? It's also a three sixty from her personality, which is shy except for when she's around specific boys? If anything, a girl can be sassy all day through but completely melt around a boy. The reversal side of that is quite strange unless she's coming up with comebacks to their insults.

2)She's studios, kind, and rarely parties. Doesn't that sound like a person that parents urge their kids to hang out with? Doesn't she seem like the person who would prefer the safety of the indoors where there are books of poems and very little danger? Yet she is on the receiving end of a love triangle and rendezvous in the Enchanted Forest. She also has lots of friends, some that are nothing like her (Lila Violett probably wouldn't even hang out with her unless Kathlyn is making her, and even then her bold personality with find Isabella's bland one boring and not even pay attention to whether or not she's beginning to like her).

3)Her reason to be a rebel makes no real sense. "Because she started to learn what choice was" isn't a good answer because a)she might know what choice is, but figures that she's already doing what she should and that Andrew will eventually change.b)she's always had some form of choice, but she has a great fairytale and everybody likes her to some extent and if she doesn't want the attention, she can just close the door and read the rest of her life. It's that simple.

4)The 'I want to be a commoner even though I'm a princess' idea isn't new. It's so popular, it's annoying sometimes. If the person is royalty, it's like the way to tell if their good is to see if they want to be a commoner. This is worth something if she wants to be free of responsibility to go on adventures. But in this case, she just doesn't want to be worshipped, not to mention that she's not the adventure type.

I hope you take this into consideration to make a better character!