Thread:ArtemisDonut/@comment-25954732-20160319193133

http://whenbookwurmswrite.tumblr.com/post/141324735249/oc-critique-merana-little

Here's the critique. I'm sorry that it's so harsh: I'm sick and I have no tact, plus I got really frustrated while writing this.

I hope you don't get too offended and that we stay friends =D

It was my pleasure to critique her and I hope you'll heed my advice, as tactless as it was. 