Talk:Bertha de Hautdesert/@comment-26081539-20171013010446/@comment-30559258-20171013013806

Well that's good! I rather like Avalon as a character and don't see much room for improvement, since she's pretty much perfect.

However, I guess I can see why you think she's too perfect. Still, I'm glad she's keeping the overachieving trait, I always thought that was a clever idea for the daughter of King Arthur. Can't wait to see what you do with her!