Talk:Wolfy Cry/@comment-24579399-20140528213012

My requested critique:

1. How does he feel about Cedar? Everyone would believe something that she would say, while nobody believes stuff he says!

2. So, if he has asked girls out, does he have a crush or the likes?

3. You need to add some more traits. Is there anything outside of his truthfulness?

That's all for now, as he has a little to work on.