Talk:Veritas Virumque/P2E4/@comment-26423188-20200120215952

i think i've exhausted what i had to say on discord but seeing nyx in recent acivity prompted me to come back and reread. some things to point out:


 * i agree with what nyx said about dialogue! i know you've said you had a hard time getting your ocs to sound like teenager but idk. your kids really perfectly fit into the world of ever after.
 * turnus + bastion on chapel roof?? i've been on edge about any possible clues/foreshadowing so this may turn out to be nothing but chapels,, CHAPELS??