Thread:EtherealNyx/@comment-27392920-20151214230146/@comment-25954732-20151216221348

Ah, I love that name! Genevieve. It has such a nice ring to it, wouldn't you say?

Alright, personality time.

You're about to find out exactly what the method to my madness is... Basically, for the times when I can't come up with an instantly awesome and coherent way to connect a character's traits, I nitpick to high heaven. Brace yourself for my words shall be brutal. Maybe.

Gullible, aye? How gullible are we talking here? Prance around naked while believing she is wearing clothes gullible? Or easily tricked into doing and believing stuff gullible? Both different sides of the spectrum could be used here.

However, I'm going to bring this up right now. How smart are we talking here? Because if we're talking cleverness, I doubt she'd be too gullible. Logical people can certainly be tricked, but for the vast majority, it takes an enormous ruse to fool reason.

If she's smart in the sense that she treads the line between insanity and genius, then some other traits become more valid (secrecy makes a difference if you're a mad scientist, right?) and others fall into question (I doubt she'd be too considerate in that regard).

Also, the considerate business. How considerate can a "insecure loner" who is "pushed out", presumably out of people's lives be? Especially since she's a quiet shut in.

Easily depressed? Fits in with crys a lot, but I might as well point out that crying a lot isn't a personality trait. It's a reaction. Also, if you want her to have depression, you better be familiar with the symptoms. It's not just being sad. I know some depressed people who instead of being sad, they lash out with anger. And lots of it.

Moving on to shut in. By shut in, you mean antisocial, yes? Perhaps she'd be that quiet, secretive girl who never shares a shard of information about her, who is incredibly smart, but never shows any side of herself to others... It's an interesting thought.

A dreamer? So, you're establishing ambition, I hope. Just having dreams with no drive to act on them doesn't sound like a very smart person to me, to be honest.

Hopeful? Hm, a girl with bad luck and bad circumstances doesn't sound like one who'd hope much. She'd probably be resigned to her fate. In fact, she'd likely attribute it to a curse, since those do exist in her world.

Pushed out? How? In what way? Isn't she a shut in anyway? Therefore, wouldn't she not want to stick around with people? Especially since she's a loner, which likely means she's one by choice.

The secretive and insecure parts indicate that as well.

That's all I gotta say for now! Can't wait for your answers!