Talk:Cupid's Crush/@comment-108.28.248.223-20150428235338/@comment-26208189-20150428235810

Much easier to read if it was fixed. Also I'm a huge freak, but my #1 writing peeve is capitalization. You got paragraph spacing by the load. And the punctuation can be fixed. I'm sorry if I'm sounding pushy. I'm just trying to show how to improve your writing.

(Trying to back you^ up here. This comment was not necessarily directed to you, Nony.)