Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-26208189-20150524005422/@comment-3991308-20150606085822

I'm going to critique Hartley Knaveson

She's a very interesting character and I love her mischieveous nature! Those kinds of characters are very fun to see, but does Hartley ever suffer consequences for her actions? How does she feel about that?

It would be cool to see you expand upon her relationships. What kinds of friends does she make? How does she really feel about Sammy and why does she like him?

I do adore how she's attention seeking because she's tired of being a minor role, though! That's probably one of my favourite traits of her.