Talk:Stars and Stripes Forever/@comment-3991308-20180217062133

ok it's like 1am and I have feelings about this

I love it a lot so far and I'm incredibly looking forward to more. ur dialogue is punchy? like. articulated. with clarity and pace and it feels sharp. it's good. it has a certain beat to it and I've always loved how you do dialogue. all your characters speak with their own nuances but it's all so distinctly Bird and I love that

also, it's incredibly clever. the exchange is gr8, witty frequently. their remarks fall into place so naturally, I love seeing how u explore Eddy and Yank as characters over the course of a conversation like so

plot wise, I'm invested. I'm also invested in the development of the characters, how yankee's plot is unfolding, this whole deal about the first real soul. it's gripping.