Thread:Checkerbored99/@comment-26470201-20151216050936

Hi again, this time I wrote this character named Eerie Eyes from this fairytale, The Changeling, I found in a Swedish storybook. I admit I put a lot of effort and creativity into Ya Chi...it's not that I don't know what she'll be like, I'm just afraid on how to write it. Could you guys help and give me some feedback please? Worst case scenario: I made her too depressing when she is at least content in the school  