Talk:Pixie Godmother/@comment-26820002-20151218180849

Pixie seems really nice  but there are a few things you might want to remember :

1.  a) There is already Farrah Goodfairy, daughter of the Fairy Godmother from Cinderella.

It would have to make her sisters with Farrah, or else it wouldn't really work.

b) That would also effect her last name, meaning it would change to Pixie Goodfairy instead of Pixie Goodmother because she is now related to Farrah.

2 . Like I said before, Pixie is totally awesome and well done but try to organize your  work.

Maybe seperate the ideas like start of with the character and then slowly go on to appearence and relationships ?

Also, it says " Pixie Godmother is a fan-created character " , all the OCs here are fan made.

3. I love the way you decribe her but, check the punctuation ,also I believe Ashlynn is the correct spelling ?

Not sure, might want to check on that.

Try using a template , if you need help on that , feel free to ask me !

It organizes your work, plus it looks more proffesional , at least I think so.

Not saying Pixie right now isn't professional =^-^=

I actually REALLY like her !

Lastly, instead of using she all the time , try using other pronouns and space out your work so it will be just a bit more easier to read.

4. Look at other famous OCs, and see what kind of format they use and how thwy write.

Don't worry about Pixie, my first OC was a TOTAL fail !

You probably don't want to see her but here is the OC > Hazel O 'Hair

Had the same problem as you, forgot about Holly and Poppy and went ahead and called her Hazel Towers !

Boy did I need help !

It's always good to ask someone you know that has lots of experience from making OCs  .

I ask  my friend Nyx most of the time or JK to help me out when I'm not sure if  it's correct.

There is no wrong or right in OC making, but just a few things to remember ^_~

If you are not sure what OC to use for inspiration or kind of like a checklist, use the COTM.

It is the Character of the month for a reason, ask the author of the OC for help if you want !

Or just ask me !

I'm not the best at OC making but I do know a thing or two about OCs, check out my other OC > Penelope Von Pea

( PS This was NOT a fail )

Hehee

Later, and you can ask me for help ANY TIME !