Talk:Asahina Gothel/@comment-4598697-20151231023113

Not too bad - I do like that you gave her personality. However, the page is a mess. it would be better if the title was simply  "Delancey Gothel" - you don't have to put "daughter of Frau Gothel" after her name (that should be mentioned in the text, not in the title). Also, you didn't ask Prince Mccurse's owner to use him - you can't use other people's OCs without their permission.