Talk:EtherealNyx/@comment-26890640-20170611164015

Um can I give a critique? First of all 'The Story Of Life' isn't a legitimate story- I myself have never heard of this 'Life' thing. I think that giving this oc this trait is reaching pretty far. You might want to remove this detail to make the character more realistic. Also 'killing people' seems like a suesh trait, no offence. Murder is bad and this oc is too young to be emulating the tortured goffick drama of a certain OTHER oc named after Darkness. (Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way, Ethereal Nyx- please the similarities are so obvious. Can I remind you that plagiarism is bad > > )

Now onto the personality. Too much personality. Unrealistic. The inability to 'remember 2013' seems suspiciously close to an overdone amnesia plotline. Maybe you should actually give them a backstory? Maybe? Or perhaps develop on the angst and drama that caused them to forget 2013- I'd love to read that fic.

Oh but don't add angst to the fic. Ew no one likes angst. Especially not this oc they don't deserve all the angst ok.