Talk:Savanne “Svane” Ælling/@comment-24579399-20140705151623

Okay, here's my critique:

1. She has a boyfriend. She never goes to parties, isn't social, and barely talks, but has a boyfriend. Please give mor elaboration of the fact that she is dating the Ever After High elite.

2. She not likable. She kind of seems like a little girl who is just an object of pity. We have seen her pity side, so I suggest that to jump from this part, you might want to have stand up to her bullies once and for all. That will show her backbone and all of that. So, otherwise, you might want to add some redeeming qualities.

That's about it for now, seeing as there is just a little bit in the bio.