Thread:Riliane De Lucifen/@comment-31597382-20190327181133/@comment-31597382-20190404202249

The way you've been using him, from Brittas perspective, made him seem a bit like that lovable jerk of a brother, which he is, but you made him so much more than that. And it works. I like it.

I'm glad you like the ending. I felt the need to have her saying something to help jog her memory, but I also didn't want anyone to recognize Luna by her voice, and that was stuck in my head. Hence the result. I'm thankful it worked!

I think I'm looking forward more to Sarah though I do want to see both.

Thanks for the advice. It makes sense to balance her out, when I first made the page, I was so focused on getting tough girl out there, I kind of forgot any other traits I could add.