User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-26382369-20150618005639/@comment-33209858-20150618011950

Oh don't worry, doll, you're not bothering me at all ^-^

I like how you've written Rose's personality, and I'm flattered that you even decided to use my examples from before after all! I feel like her positive traits and her flaws are pretty well-balanced, although I'd like to see more about her interests and hobbies. I'm wondering if she has any other interests besides music? Is she artistically inclined in other fields? It's fine if she's not, but I just thought I'd ask~ Also, I noticed that you mentioned she was able to talk with trees? When she does this, do other fairytales see her and think she's crazy? Or does she do it privately so no one can judge her? And what does she talk about with the trees? I'd like to see more about that, since I think that's an interesting tidbit about her

I'd also like to see more about her relationship with her parents. We know how her parents feel about her, but how does Rose feel about them? It says that she distances herself from them - Is there a reason for that? Is it a defense mechanism? Does Rose feel bad about it? etc. etc. I also like Rose's whole thing with romance - She doesn't like it but keeps getting sucked into other people's love lives. Irony is great, isn't it?

With that said, I'm wondering if Rose is actually good with romance? You mentioned it very briefly under her personality section, but perhaps you could expand on that a bit more? Like, does she give good advice, or does she sometimes purposefully give bad love advice? Or does she sometimes just get fed up with it and tells people to just go to Cupid?

I'm also excited to see what you come up with for her appearance/design, as well as her pet! But for now, I'd say Rose is looking great! C: