User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-24408187-20150618052234/@comment-33209858-20150618183908

Hey there~ I'd be more than happy to help ^^

Okay, so I like Indigo's personality, but I'd like to see more of it. Perhaps more of her interests and hobbies, other than causing people pain. For example, does she like to read? If so, what and why? I also noticed you said Indigo felt jealous of other people's joys - I'd like to see more expanded on that. How does this make her feel? Obviously it must cause her to lash out, but does she ever have doubts about herself? Does she ever feel bad for causing people pain? Has she ever tried to be geniunely nice before? I feel like Indigo's personality section focuses a lot more on her negative traits than her positive ones, so it might be nice to add in some postivies here and there, just to give her a three-dimensional personality instead of just making her a villain.

Also, has anyone ever seen her for who she truly is? If so, how does she treat them? A character like this is fun to work with, and it's esepcially fun to work with the relationships of a character like this. And speaking of relationships... Why does Indigo argue a lot with her mother? How has this affected her while growing up? I noticed you said that her father wants her to go down the path of darkness, but her mother doesn't - Is this a contributing factor to why they argue? If so, how does it make Indigo feel about her destiny?

Speaking of destiny, why is she a Royal? How does she feel about her Happily Never After, or even her antagonist role? And how does she feel about Raven Queen, who is meant to be a villain like her, but decides to Rebel against it? Also, it's a minor detail, but I'd add why her favorite class is Villainology 101.

Overall, I like Indigo and her character. I'd just focus on expanding her personality a bit more, to give her more depth ^^ If you need any help or advice or if you want me to review another character, just let me know~