User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-10860529-20150705061928/@comment-10860529-20150708070320

First off, much thanks for both your critique and review! I'm glad to see that The Road to Oz still holds up as it did when it was first published, and your noted advice was very helpful. Perhaps "pitted against" wasn't the best term to describe their treatment, at since their varying oppinions were much less acted out than implied. I'll definitely try to talk to Nikole's owner (who isn't currently active on the wikia) to clarify any more details needed regarding their relationship. ^^

Also, you raise a good question about Cora's sudden change in behavior! I'll definitely go to expand, since I intended to imply that she tends to bottle up her feelings of loneliness and mistrust (that spawed after the Kalidah attack) and I wasn't quite sure if I'd managed that correctly. Again, thank you so much Vin!