User blog comment:Vinnnn/Character Critiques, Tips, and Hints/@comment-26382369-20150710043256/@comment-33209858-20150718035317

Eep I apologize for this being such a late reply! :c So I'll get right onto some ideas for you!

For her personality, I love the idea of making her very strong-willed and a bit of a "tomboy". After reading her story, I thought it would fit the daughter of the maiden quite well. Maybe she's sick of gender roles and wants to prove to the world that anyone can act however they please, no matter what gender they identify themselves with. Maybe even though she acts like a "tomboy", she still dresses like a "girly-girl" because she likes it. She could be this headstrong, openminded sort of person who might come off as a bit abrasive or perhaps imposing, but she does have her heart in the right place.

That said, you could go the opposite route. You could make her prissy, feminine and very traditional. Maybe she finds her destiny as dressing up as a man to be a crime against femininity or something. You could make her uptight and girly who thinks that damsels are for saving and heroes are for rescuing. Maybe her views are a bit more old-fashioned, maybe because she romanticizes the idea of a perfect fairytale that always has the prince doing the rescuing and the princess being this helpless damsel in distress.

And for an eye color, I'd say perhaps hazel/hazel green or hunter green would be nice. And hair color, perhaps chestnut brown or woodsy brown, perhaps even a very dark brown color.

Hopefully this helped and, once again, I apologize for the delay of response! And if you need any more help or ideas, just let me know~